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There was a poor girl from Penang
Who charmed birds from the trees when she sang
It's worthwhile narrating
The birds were migrating
And smothered the girl from Penang
Who charmed birds from the trees when she sang
It's worthwhile narrating
The birds were migrating
And smothered the girl from Penang
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Now then - I think this is humorous even though it ends in tragedy, so I have put it in the Limerick category.
It might raise an upturned curvy lip, even if it doesn't produce a grin or guffaw.
Rev 1 - removed the word "poor" from the last line to keep the timing right(ish)
It might raise an upturned curvy lip, even if it doesn't produce a grin or guffaw.
Rev 1 - removed the word "poor" from the last line to keep the timing right(ish)
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It does have good flow. The tregedy is fine. I agree it still belongs in the limerick section. No guffaw but definitely an upcurled lip!